Dr Doran
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Paddy, all we need is a narrator's voice-over furthering the plot a bit .... may I suggest something like, "Night in the City. I took the auto out after my phone call with Jon. Things were happening. Big things. The parking garage yawned blankly like the unmonocled eye of the Monopoly Man. The gleaming steel vehicles flashed by, each holding its secrets, and those concrete walls were hemming me in. Had to get out. Had to get away. I knew where my redemption lay. Time to drive out, to join The Night."